导读

高分作文三大创作模块

　　文章的结尾不好，苍白平淡，则给人虎头蛇尾的感觉，很有可能因为一句话而减弱前面的文采印象，所以要有意识安排一个闪光句型或句式在结尾，让阅卷老师读到结尾时能眼晴一亮。如：

　　◎◎交错修辞语句

　　We cannot always upgrade our test score to improve our language ability, but we can improve our language ability to upgrade our test score.

　　◎◎排比语句

　　Give them the time to relax and play. Give them the chance to enjoy a happy childhood, just like the free birds flying across the sky. Give them the scope to develop not only their intelligence but also their characters in a balanced way.

　　三、修改润色

　　写作完成后不要急于放松休息，必须进行诸如名词单复数、时态一致、拼写及用词等方面的检查。当然浏览检查不可能推翻全部内容，因为时间有限，也为了保持卷面整洁，修改工作要以纠正明显的语法拼写错误为主。为了避免用语单调重复，也可将若干机械平淡的语言替换掉，实现语言的丰富多变。